Thursday, 26 March 2015

Amelia's knowledge


Malama honua writing


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Tomorrow the Malama honua voyage will be welcome onto the sandy shores pt england.All 12 schools in the manaiakalani cluster will be performing 3 waiatas as the come towards the beach.
The Hokule’a and Hikianalia sailed 140 000 miles across the pacific.They called their Malama Honua.The important message they said was  protect the world.We had an special event they gathered and sang lovely songs.They felt warm and welcome.

Friday, 20 March 2015

My learning

Motat

Last week on Monday the year 4’s went Motat to learn about inventions we went on an old school bus.


We came and met the meeting room and listen to our new instructor.Her name is Katherine.


We went to a lot of kiwi inventions we saw old fashion cars.I saw the  village with the old schoolhouse.I saw the cottages jail with stocks.Group 3 arrived at the maze i took one step in and i did not know where to go.The rest of my group hoped in and we where running around everywhere but me and julianna stuck together.Me and  julianna finally found our way out of the maze, it was so interesting.


Reflection





Criteria for an Effective Paragraph
Par 2
Par 3
Par 4
Par 5
⚈ Start with a topic sentence.




⚈ Have at least 2-3 connected sentences.




⚈ Have sentences that are effective that
  1. have varied beginnings




    b.  have juicy vocab e.g action/describing  words




    (c) grammatically correct




  (d) punctuated correctly.




(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
Next time I  need to make it correct have sentences  juicy vocab

My Motat story

My Motat story

Yesterday the year 4’s went motat on an old school bus to learn about exciting inventions.

After that we all walked sensibly in a line to the meeting place.
When we arrived at the meeting place we ate our delicious morning tea so we didn’t get hungry.
When we finished our eating we began on our adventures for the day.

Group 3 arrived at the maze i took one step in and i did not know where to go.
The rest of my group hoped in and we where running around everywhere but me and julianna stuck together.

Me and  julianna finally found our way out of the maze, it was so interesting.

Friday, 13 March 2015

My cookie face biscit

My cookie face biscit

it was so fun because i get to eat M&M.

My cookie face biscit

It was so sweet and delicious and it was melting in my mouth.

My cookie face

We used lots of ingredients to decorate our cookies.It was so challenging to put on the sticky icing.Then I took the crunchy M&M and stick it up top of the icing.After that we put our chewy snakes on.

My cookie face biscit

We used lots of ingredients to decorate our cookies.It was so challenging to put on the sticky icing.Then I took the crunchy M&M and stick it up top of the icing.After that we put our chewy snakes on.

Faces

We decided to cookie faces.So we had to wait patiently to get the ingredients.

My cookie face biscit

In our classroom we had to stay inside because the picnic was cancelled.I was so disappointed because it was going to be so fun.The sky had dark stormy clouds and to much showers and a drizzling sky.

Monday, 9 March 2015

My word cloud

This is my word cloud about having my very own chromebook to help me learn create and share.